Sunday, September 19, 2010

Honors Prompt #3

Elizabeth Gilbert’s writing methods are like breath of fresh air. They are like a comic relief of the so-called trauma each individual is destined to go through. They are like hammers and drills and wrenches, screwdrivers and scrapers and staple guns, and nuts and bolts and measuring tapes, saws, and pliers and pipes and powered polishers.  They are like a family of personalities and a family of brilliant scholars and doctors and lawyers and chefs. And like a pallet of watercolors painting each page with a new soul and a new characteristic, a new dream and a new message, and a new (and improved) story to tell. Figuratively speaking, each appliance or family member or watercolor or soul is a tool: “aka” a writing technique that supposedly is used to make things more interesting  (perhaps, without great intention, less) for purposes of not completely boring the reader to death. However when a good writer uses these tools or methods correctly, like Elizabeth Gilbert does, a story is transformed from being written, to being told. Let me explain further. Excusing the obvious uses of personification and similes and the in body conversations, (which, just for your information, are used so beautifully by Elizabeth Gilbert, I want to cry) the one tool that seems now in retrospect, a completely and unbelievably underrated and simple concept is this: Casualty. With the goal to speak to her readers, Gilbert has used this idea of casualty to portray her messages through her stories. The tone behind each word in this text gives the reader, in this case me, a genuine focus. Her focus is to single me out as an individual and speak to me as if she and I are sitting in coffee shop like two old friends, telling her story with intense emotion and intense intention to poke the hell out of me until I find in my self something to relate too. Some relatable spark that will then force me to not only sympathize to Gilbert but to myself and my own broken alter ego and conscience. I believe that this is the key to unlocking a reader’s attention. When a writer can make each chapter, each sentence, and each fragment and word relatable, a reader is naturally drawn to it. The honest truth is that we are rarely able to admit to our own vulnerabilities and insecurities; so reading about somebody else’s is just easier. That is why this novel is a best seller. It is that simple. We want to read about other people’s struggles to vicariously through the text, re assure our own. People read this because Gilbert is not talking to her readers; she is talking to each one of us, individually. So I will steel this. I am going to steal the technique of casualty and call it my own. Well because, that’s how writers become writers, we steal. 

10 comments:

  1. No Iz you are a breath of fresh air. The way your write is so beautiful and thoughtful I am truly amazed. Excellent Excellent Excellent, thats all there is to be said.

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  2. I really like how you used appliances and families to explain the different methods that Elizabeth Gilbert uses. This was written in a creative way and it made me want to read on!

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  3. We were always told stealing is a bad thing, but you make it seem so good haha Good in a way that can help us. It's so true that Gilbert makes you feel like you 2 are in a coffee shop talking about this. She is so personal and so one on one. I have found myself using this "individual" technique in my writing as well.

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  4. I really like this you are a great writer. My favorite part is the last bit where you talk about Gilbert not talking to her readers but talking to each one of us individually. It makes the story more personal to the reader. Great job!

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  5. This is very well written piece. i like the part at the end when you say we steal, because nothing in life is really original, it all is a different version of something or inspiration from another. I enjoyed hearing this.

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  6. You have the most beautiful blog posts. I think they are very honest and show the real you. Loveee that. I also love that you are a fan of Gilbert's work. You went into great detail to explain the kind of writing she uses and it shows that you really understand what she is writing, just beautiful Izzy.

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  7. WOW Izzy, the way you describe things is so perfect. You use to many metaphors and similes, I love it. Your writing is AMAZING, it's so deep, with so much emotion behind it.

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  8. This was an amazing post. You're ability to write so beautifully about such straight forward concept is wonderful. You used really beautiful language and was able to describe Gilbert's styles in a really elegant way.

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  9. OMG BE MORE AMAZING!!! Izzy this was wonderfully done. You did an amazing job conveying your emotion through the text. I love all the smilies and metaphors they brought the text to life. You are a great writer and I think that you did an amazing job telling us your side. My favorite is the ending sentence when you say, "We want to read about other people’s struggles to vicariously through the text, re assure our own. People read this because Gilbert is not talking to her readers; she is talking to each one of us, individually. So I will steel this. I am going to steal the technique of casualty and call it my own. Well because, that’s how writers become writers, we steal."GREAT JOBBB <3

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  10. I definitely agree with what you are saying here about borrowing styles. We become better writers by looking at works done by some of the best writers and trying to develop the knowledge that they have. Good writing really only comes down to a few things: Honesty about the story, being grammatically sound, and being creative, all of which are present in your works

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